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About Me Member Shadow Deviant disdainfulvisionMale/Canada Recent Activity Deviant for 6 Years
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with every grain of sand I die a little...

Mon Sep 6, 2004, 2:50 PM
Been going down
this poorly lit, winding path
Passing by shadows of moments lost
wondering if they still know my face

Sewing the seeds of alienating lies
never quite shrouded by the clouds I brought along
Slowly tearing another layer
off my perpetually dying shell...

Another castle, chapter two,
the book seems to only change its cover.
I fall and stumble on my own guilt
Never quite could be like them

A cold wave of solitude engulfs me
and the thousands of smiles are still the same.
This line I wasn't meant to cross
has long been lost beneath the dust

Not a mere mask, but a new world
with each passing cage that I meet
Create, divert and sin
but never tell the truth

Longing for that moment described
in the parchments of old
Never quite reaching a glimmer
of that which I hold true...

Another step, another thorn -
these moments are forever lost.
A frozen touch upon my spine
seem to consume this soul of mine...

And from the mightiest emperor
I turn to dust once more...


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Marius...

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Devious Info

  • Current Residence: Toronto, Canada
  • Interests: Art, photography, poetry, humanity
  • Favourite movie: Matrix, Fight Club, American Beauty, Scent of a Woman, The Crow
  • Favourite band or musician: Tool, Tea Party, Pink Floyd, Radiohead
  • Favourite poet or writer: Jorge Luis Borges, Nietzsche
  • Favourite style of art: Photo Manipulation
  • Personal Quote: I don’t believe in these false gods you have contrived
  • Tools of the Trade: The initial tool: Imagination. And result of reality: my Insanity
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:iconashwhinny:
wow .again i am inspired , ive added this account to my watch too . I find your writing stretches my mind and concept s. it gives me cause to ponder , to look at things in new ways and create new thought patterns .How exciting and enlivening that is:D :hug:

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:iconvirginsuicide123:
you amaze me twice now...

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:snowflake: MERRY :santa: CHRISTMAS :snowflake:



get down with jesus. :giggle:
:icondemonlight:
'Ello. I classify you as a literary deviant. As such, you qualify for a watch, as long as you respond. I am trying to round up as many writers as possible, because we simply don't get enough recognition. So we will have to give each other recognition instead. So if you comment me, I'll do the same for you. I make it a matter of pride to leave in depth critiques, and value my DevFriends.

What do you think?

(please note that I am away this week - so it might be a little while before I get back to you)

PS, If you take me up on this offer, take a look at my journals. Your existential arguments kind of corroborate mine. Nothing is truly original.

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:iconlaced-lenore:
Free falling into the playground of your mind.
Deviant watching your words...

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:icon54b:
Hey, You're a friend of Metaphysicals. I grew up with, and just wanted you to know I find your revelations intruiging.
:iconjphnx22:
~disdainfulvision
Marius Budu
is an Emotional Poet
is Male
is a deviant since Jul 22, 2003, 12:27 PM
has 2,000 pageviews
is located in Canada
last visited 5w 6d 8h 59m 25s ago
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:iconbrassshadow:
Hey how are things going, been away from deviant art for a while so I just thought I would drop a line.

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The only hunting I do is for the right image.
:iconolieviya:
Long time no see.
:wave:

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:iconmagicaldeviantjew64:
Thank you, darling, for the favorite on "In My Basement." I shall return to your site soon. :-)

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